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Cause And Effect

1/17/2016

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The Bombing of the twin towers.
Many people died that day.
From that day on to go in the U.S you need two kinds of ID .
The whole nation was in shambles. we learned later that is was done by the terrorist group Al Qaeda.          In The place of the twin towers its the world trade center.
It was a bad day : - ( .
At least the Al Qaeda is gone now. 
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ben
1/18/2016 11:03:29 am

you put a bit of detail in there you edited your work well
you could improve on putting a little more effort in your write and put just a little more details like how many people died .

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Brandon.B
1/18/2016 11:06:07 am

It` kind of hard to see what`s missing you did have some detail not 100% but around 50 or 70% in the middle kind of but ya more detail and good job on punctuations.

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