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Order Of Importance

1/13/2016

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                                                                                                             911

Breaking news : today people are trying to find out why a really bad day is the same number as the popo and other stuff. Their telling us why. But some of them tell us it was a mistake, and the rest of them say they did it because they want people to remember that number as a good thing. The thing is those are only their ideas, because the rest of the world still has no clue what to think. That`s are report on the number 911. back to you Carl at the office.
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Ms. Bains
1/13/2016 02:08:18 pm

I would like to see much more detail in your writing. I can see that you chose to write through a news article lens. However, I would like to see you include more information from most important to least.

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